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Old 01-22-2008, 09:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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heres a Shakespearean sonnet I just wrote.

"Options out of 2

Plans of a structure, built with false sincere
The hidden flaws create the perfect view,
And feelings intoxicate as if beer
This becomes the connection of the two

If these bonds are true, flaws begin to show,
And the song remains the same, with new games
But if the flaws grow, it then deadens the glow
Never the less the goal is to stay same

Days grow old, with hope the connection wont
If they do, the connection wasn’t true
But if true, one wont hear, oh dear please don’t
And the sky just remains the shinning blue

Either way one of the two stays to be true
Be it love, or the other waiting to sue"
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