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Originally Posted by al-Mu'akhkhir
meh, from a literary standpoint I would say that your style of writing is unimpressive, in the sense that it leaves no impression. Your use of diction and sentence structure is bland, verging on unoriginal. Your overuse of vulgarities makes the piece overly crass. It's really not hard to see why this wouldn't get published.
No offense.
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im actually a fan of minimalism. i like the writing styles of kurt vonnegut and chuck palahniuk. as far as vulgarities i didnt even really think about it. the writing i like often has vulgarities.
i think obviously we have different tastes in style, but you are right about me needing to develop my style.