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Mercury · 10-13-2009, 07:36 PM

Interesting... I sense the emotion and I do get some imagery out of this. Still not quite sure where you're coming from though. Old age? Also, the flow was a little choppy. But I like the content.

8/10

10-13-2009, 07:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mercury Special Delivery Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The States Posts: 8,190 Thanks: 294 Thanked 799 Times in 537 Posts	Interesting... I sense the emotion and I do get some imagery out of this. Still not quite sure where you're coming from though. Old age? Also, the flow was a little choppy. But I like the content. 8/10