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This is great vanilla, it is a really cool way to write the story. It's like you are writing it from the way a normal person would encounter life. Swearing, drugs, even the subtle comments that come to the characters mind. Im really digging this man, please keep coming up with more. I've got an idea for a story that I thought of while i was super bakd, maybe ill get the inspiration to write it soon...keep up the good writing
-whit3.rhino
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