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vanilla · 04-28-2008, 08:10 PM

i really like it !
i dont know about the last sentence though, it feels like you really drove it home before that and just kinda threw that last one in and it detracts a bit
thats it though

04-28-2008, 08:10 PM	#7 (permalink)
vanilla the cunning linguist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: 905/514 Posts: 5,115 Thanks: 0 Thanked 8 Times in 6 Posts	i really like it ! i dont know about the last sentence though, it feels like you really drove it home before that and just kinda threw that last one in and it detracts a bit thats it though __________________