that really was a nice piece and conveyed much which resonates and is seemingly familiar to me. it is remniscent of and reminded me of some of my shroom experiences too. i recall while dwelling inbetween, that same sense of feeling something so profound, yet words could not begin to grasp or express it adequatly. and maybe that limitation of words in conveying such apparent depth, is related to preserving the purity of it all. like there is a time where words are mute, or deaf.
still...the last line is kind of like all alone - and yet it fits so brilliantly and I can relate to that much.
i would venture a slight...irk/quip...'if' i'd written that(doubtful)....i may have made that one line...'when sun shines
in your heart' instead. thats just moi though.
well done.
