Thread: my extremely short story
View Single Post
Old 07-05-2009, 06:20 PM   #7 (permalink)
SpankyMcLankey
Mongloid Reptilian
 
SpankyMcLankey's Avatar
 
Status: Offline
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 2,000
Thanks: 554
Thanked 427 Times in 336 Posts
Originally Posted by Grieves View Post
Stories, yes even short stories, need an intro, character development, a conflict, resolution and conclusion and yours is nothing more than an intro to a story that never develops...
:finger:
__________________
Originally Posted by Geeno View Post
so in my eyes it seems like the banishment of photoshops were like throwing out the whole harvest because of one bad plant. That mentality only creates animosity among those who were compliant with a mutually agreed code of decency.
  Reply With Quote