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11-08-2009, 01:55 PM
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my new song
please tell me what you think, any feedback is appreciated.
im aware the intro is long, i dont care thats how i want it
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11-08-2009, 04:12 PM
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not bad at all, get a bass line and i approve of your song
im always a sucker for strings
edit- link is gone btw
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11-08-2009, 04:33 PM
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I find the intro a bit long.
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11-08-2009, 04:40 PM
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hey dude wanna post you song again?
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11-08-2009, 06:14 PM
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11-08-2009, 06:22 PM
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Do you have an mp3 or wav version? I'll lay a bass line on top of that if you want.
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11-08-2009, 09:36 PM
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its in the works thanks though
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11-08-2009, 09:38 PM
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It's midi-tasctic.
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11-08-2009, 09:44 PM
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what does that mean?
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11-08-2009, 09:48 PM
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Those strings are actually legit. What programs are you using?
I love a long intro. I think you cut it at just the right time. I can get into this kind of shit. 
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11-08-2009, 09:56 PM
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reason 4.
i love strings, they put me in the loving mood.
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11-08-2009, 09:57 PM
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i don't think there are enough key changes.
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11-08-2009, 10:07 PM
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a friend mentioned the same thing, good ears. switching up the key on a bridge would be useful.
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11-08-2009, 10:59 PM
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very nice
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11-09-2009, 05:02 AM
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Dude I wouldn't switch up the key, given the song you want to keep that whole thing in the same one, but do switch up the progression a bit for a bridge for sure.
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11-09-2009, 04:47 PM
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i thought the same thing when they mentioned a key change. id just either change up the progesh slightly at one point, or switch of the rhythm a bit.
i think it sounds pretty damn good how it is. needs maybe a bass line or some vocals or something to bring it all together.
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instead of setting out to connect all the dots, the intent of zen is seeing the dots, letting them connect and then seeing how oneself connects to them.
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"For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return."
"Knowledge speaks, wisdom listens" Hendrix
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11-09-2009, 06:13 PM
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thanks guys and girls
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11-10-2009, 01:23 PM
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i like the strings.
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