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07-10-2008, 10:08 AM
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"Whatever floats your boat" she said
but somehow the idea of being a shipwreck excites me the peak of the iceberg but all she sees is the tip metaphors are all I speak in these days but they barely keep my head above the surface I never cared for water anyhow 
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There’s a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part, you can’t even passively take part, and you’ve got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you’ve got to make it stop! And you’ve got to indicate to the people who run it, to the people who own it, that unless you’re free, the machine will be prevented from working at all!  Click for lulz Last edited by BearsysRevenge; 07-10-2008 at 02:11 PM. Reason: forgot a quotation mark at the beginning |
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07-10-2008, 12:39 PM
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That has a pretty sweet flow! Keep it up bearsy.
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07-11-2008, 01:43 PM
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Word, thanks man
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There’s a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part, you can’t even passively take part, and you’ve got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you’ve got to make it stop! And you’ve got to indicate to the people who run it, to the people who own it, that unless you’re free, the machine will be prevented from working at all! Click for lulz |
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07-12-2008, 07:53 AM
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Under every pebble is an 'Iceberg'
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07-12-2008, 11:03 AM
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Why does a poem need any structure if it convey a point? Did bearsey even call this a poem? I don't see you contributing, so don't bring those who are down. Thanks.
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