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Old 07-22-2008, 09:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Imagine the whole world living and working in the sense of gratitude. A huge colony like the ants, helping each other for the benefit of keeping everyone happy and healthy. Instead of bribing people for their money, help them for the cause of kindness. Just happy and positive and going. What happened to that dream?
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Old 07-22-2008, 10:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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That dream died once America got taken over by Europe. Cool little peice your wrote up here. Keep it up! Pittsburg, that's where I reside.
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Old 07-22-2008, 12:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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no one is free from greed. if people were of pure character and upright motives then the world would be a much cleaner place. its like if everyone would clean up their act then we would see a drastic change in the state of the world, but theres no hope for unified action across 6+ Billion people or w/e the world population is today.

its a sad realization.
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Very good writing!
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Old 07-23-2008, 03:34 PM   #6 (permalink)
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People are full of war/hatred/distrust/disillusionment. This is not to say INDIVIDUALS are full of said things, but people as a whole are. The idealistic dream you mention here while sounding amazing and honestly not very complicated are infact beyond the realms of "People" because in the end it takes only 1 to believe they have been "cheated" or "given lesser than another" and once that happens discontentment spreads among the rest that then begin to question if THEY have been cheated or scammed as well. Got to love that slippery slope mentality.

Isn't it great to be "civilized"?
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Are we really 'civilized'?
The day will come when we will have to ALL re-learn how to live!
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agreed to that,
it's just our inner selves that make up the feelings we have, yeah it's natural and been around for a long time, but believing that you don't need something like hate and etc. everyone would be so much more chill and less laksj;flkjsdfj chaotic.




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