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Old 08-11-2008, 12:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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"Breathe in breathe out"
Will this be the last breath that I take
My fate lies, within every decision that I make
The next morning will I arise
Will I arise to see the sun rise
When I see the sun set
It reminds me of life
Because everything will eventually cease
And one day, we'll all be resting in peace
Now as we all coexist in another day
Never thinking that like the ones that preceded it
Will rot and fade away
They will only remain as a collective memory
A memory that will be great for some
And others will be glad the day is done
Each set of twenty four hours
Is a day in a world we call ours
Now I'm not perfect I've wasted many days myself
But mistakes is what makes everyone like everyone else
This burden of an over active brain
Can cause me to snap, and go insane
I wonder if death is a solution to all pain
But then again...
This would be the last breath I take
Because your fate lies within every decision you make
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Old 08-11-2008, 12:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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haha this ones alittle less serrious

Give me 3 hits and ten minutes
and I'll be doing fine
Give me 3 hits and ten minutes
and I'll be on cloud nine
Give me 6 hits and ten minutes
and my mouth begins to dry
Give me 6 hits and ten minutes
I'll question everything with why
Give me 12 hits and ten minutes
and the room will start to spin
Give me 12 hits and ten minutes
and I'll forget where I've been
It was just the few of us
And we were all smokin' the cannabis
Just a group of kids looking to run and hide
From the problems from the out and inside
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Old 08-11-2008, 12:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Keep it up, the second one is funny.
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Old 08-11-2008, 09:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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haha thanks i wrote the second one when i first started to smoke
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