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Ohmmmm
Here,
a place, a locus, "Defined." There a home, a construct, "united." Keeping in safety, finding inner sanctity. Dreams and dwellings, the separations of "reality". When in truth one is whole, but all is one. but all is a property of nothing. Where do we belong? A question none wish to ponder, a depth none deemable to plunder. the definitions of a solid... In a universe of the infinite. How meaningless our propositions, when words cannot mesh the fictitious. Ohh help those that are so lost. mmm bring the justice some have sought. While some cross their legs, and others lay accidental eggs, Omega, I am here. I am one, none, and all. Omega, I will share. I will give, take, and dream. Ohmmm hega miii noo take ahh fulfill my barren sill, my eyes but a window, my body but a shelf, my mind but a light. "guidance", I do not dare. there is no left nor right. Just lead me to lively pleaseantries, and a peaceful infinite eternity. Free-write as fawwwk, I think this will be a fun one to read when sober. (Edit): My fasvorite pipe was named ohm.
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To be completely honest I didn't even know what "Omega" really meant/how it's used until today. Which now some how it seems to make more sense. Yeah it's kind of a prayer, good interpretation. I'll have to write a sober(when I wrote this I was getting shwasty) verse in there or two, I actually am fond of this one.
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i picture you sitting on the ground eyes closed all fucked up just kinda letting this fly out of your mouth haha
maybe you became and channel for some spirit
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^^^^ HAHA that happened to me one time. Me and my friend (who is Mexican) were tripping on acid and about 2 hours in, he said I looked at him and rambled off this sentence in Spanish. I don't speak Spanish. He just looked at me real funny and started laughing. I said " I WANT MY BREAD RIGHT NOW BITCH". I don't remember saying anything....
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I believe depressants slow the CNS, not thought(the energy in your dome), just your brains connectivity to your thought. So that's usually why I am drunk and real stoned when I write/sing. It's intention based writing essentially(I intend a thought and the rest just spews). The more I start to rhyme the lesser the trance I am in. I do the same thing with my paintings, which I have a few posted in the art's forum.
And I do tend to go into a trance when I write/sing. So I got a tape recorder and some of the poems I've posted on here are directly from my tape-recorder. Thanks for all those who enjoyed. (Grateful): Tell me about it, one my forty dose visit to the other side...I did a bunch of things, but all I was consious of was fractals which all "meant" a blue ball. Way to impossible to explain ahha, but ever since I've believed in the collective unconsious heavily. I'm sure you've also had the whole "did I say that or just think it really loud"? hahah, Uncle Sidney makes me lawlz. Also since then on heavy doses of hash brownies(while flashing back), I've had telepathic conversations with people. I'm not saying drugs gave me super powers or something I'm just relating to yeah haha. You might not have even said anything he might have just heard your thoughts in his native toungue. (edit)I find it weird that this stanza entirely holds to the last paragaph I wrote "the definitions of a solid... In a universe of the infinite. How meaningless our propositions, when words cannot mesh the fictitious." Some of life synchronicities(s.p. ) are so strange... Remember language is a format for our minds information, not our minds information in it's raw state.
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