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Old 09-27-2008, 10:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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In the bowery

and now i can see
i know where we are
and where we've been
and what to do
just as then
was then and
this is now
the end forever but
it's only starting
now and then
where we've been
im just starting
turn me off
and let it down
it's better without a fight
just sink sink sink
to the bottom
where you want
to the pulse
and the heart
i can hear you breathe
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Old 10-05-2008, 06:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hm, sort of seems negative, but also a truthful sort of living edge to it that gives.. something, like resurrection too.

I don't know, but it caught me. Nice.
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Old 10-06-2008, 11:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks brotha !! that answer is a little cryptic to me too, but it caught me as well
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like a poem of its own?




ok yea maybe thats pushing it.
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