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Old 10-04-2008, 05:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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It's been a while since I wrote something sooo here's a free free-write!

Cause if I can't talk to you,
and you won't listen to me,
then your just a statue to me.
heh...
You're just a statue to me, you mean nothing to me.

A projection is only a mystery to itself.
While the stage man, knows the act,
AND I'M ONLY HERE FOR THE CLIMAX.

Who're you to be mystified?
But a puppet unaware of it's very strings.
"Well their yours too?" I say,
"you see no terms to even negotiate."
Ehh...
You're just a statue to me, you mean nothing to me.

Yet you're what their all here to see,
they spent their time and interest.
By no means does that really define worth().

Re-evaluation, conclusions, no more variables.
You are just a statue to me, you are nothing.



-EDIT- this is about my three friends who have died the past three weeks. One got shot, the other died in Iraq(probably got shot), and the last a motorcycle accident.
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