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Old 03-18-2009, 03:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Transit haiku

I got dressed too late
Now I'm going to miss the bus
Damn it there is goes.

Garbage bag of clothes
All these goods weighed down heavy
Going to the thirft store

Time for the next bus
But here I sit typing this
Sorry yall, gotta run!
 
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Old 03-18-2009, 08:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i meant to comment this yesterday when i read it
i cant say i know you personally but for some reason this gives me a good idea of your personality.
i like it
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instead of setting out to connect all the dots, the intent of zen is seeing the dots, letting them connect and then seeing how oneself connects to them.
"Knowledge speaks, wisdom listens" Hendrix
"A gentle answer turns away wrath, But a harsh word stirs up anger"- words to live by
 
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Old 03-18-2009, 08:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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You mean this afternoon or are you reading the cards again?

Thanks for the critique'

Annoyance swells and reason takes over to centre.
Kind acts doesn't make you on time for the bus.
I had a really go talk with the next bus driver, the one that I caught!
 
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