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Old 04-20-2009, 11:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Can't call this a poem or anything really, but expression. I just wrote it. You is kinda me.

Draw the line, take sides, define, for your sake or ours. Understanding in a cut out. Understanding in staying you, understanding in integrity, in real value, fail or fly. Couldx, shouldx, would?? Deserving, history, no blame, but fault, but balance the fruit from effort. Deserve more, understand context, deserve reality. Frustrate the missed hit.
Long for the first, second step. Third. Frustrate patience. Understand forgiveness. Understand need for acknowledgment. Its not just not challenging it, its making concession to the right, best. Understand need, want it, nourish it. Nourish it! Make it be, make it for meself. Work for it, work for before the moment. Make it for not just' who's there now.
Make beside, inside, equal. Reach out, make it easy. Make it known, make it shown. Make it understanding for you. Make it sobering up. You'd understand, me'd realize, its only such a chance for relight. For first, right light.

Keep your part, step closer to loosing the value of any your whole.
Make it sobering up, let you cradle it, reach.

Make it you. Sober up, put it in its place.
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There are four fruits.

The first one is high up, you need to climb on your own to get it, or have a team build a ladder, but its yours.

The second one, closer down, but you need a boost. You can take it down and share, or grab it for yourself.

The third, is low, and you can just bat it down with a stick, or throwing rocks till it falls for you. Eat it or share it.

The fourth one is just at the edge of your reach. You can grab it, but it takes a lot of effort to pull down from there. The energy gained versus the energy lost makes it more worthwhile with an extra set of hands to pull. Eat it together, or run away and eat too much.

This last is the best fruit. I stop throwing seeds, you can bring me the second fruit before we get a fourth.
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