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Old 04-29-2009, 07:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My Heart I Give to Her

My heart I give to her,
breathless at her sight.
Dazed by her fumes,
steaming from her warmth
as I take her in.

My thoughts drift away.
She changes my state of mind,
your quickening my life’s reality.
Time slows down

as I let her out.
Relaxation, a calm state, I want to feel.
Feeling of that nothing matters
and at ease.
The high point of the day.
My heart I give to her.
 
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Old 04-29-2009, 09:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 05-02-2009, 10:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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ah! feelin' fine, state o' mind chilled, ralaxing and feelin' happy, i hope the happiness is contagious, keep mellow and never stop philosophising!
 
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Old 05-02-2009, 10:46 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for sharing. Don't mind the alt comment. If you are it's okay if you are turning your thoughts to your heart, it more than most do with an alternate account.

I doubt you are though, just wanted to add my .02
 
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Old 05-03-2009, 10:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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why doubt?
 
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