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Old 05-18-2009, 08:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
the cunning linguist
 
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this isnt real

step on it -
kill them all
and make
them suffer.

my love is
a faucet
open it and
ill bleed for
you forever

drown me and
ill die
a million times
for you
in this dream

take it all and
well live forever
in our minds
heaven and hell
are the same place
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Old 05-19-2009, 11:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Interesting writing, a bit angsty for my liking, but good none the less
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