sundazed

[vanilla]

every word unspoken
is a relic of this
restrained ambition

this need to give
and give more
until it all makes sense
to no one but yourself

this need to take
everything and change it
make it physical
and real, in surreality

these hands breathe
and shake and write
and live for more
but want nothing else
than to just be

[Mafoo]

i like the way you write.
very nice

[vanilla]

thanks

[Mydriasis]

I like this one.