First attempt at writing...

[wallyandthecarp]

Have you ever been inside your head?
beyond your eyes the land of reds and blue
where solid things appear to bend
the colors on the wall stare back at you
have you ever been out of your mind?
infinity ain't hard to find out there
every atom every cell
love will over power hell
its everywhere

Have you ever thought outside the box?
rid of all the chains and locks held you
question theories others taught
everything you think you though you knew (who knew)

[Jack Straw]

Hey pretty decent for a first time write. Remember to show. Don't tell. Write for the audience. You can write for yourself in your diary. But if you plan on showing a piece off you don't want to clutter it up with abstractions only the writer understands.

[SweetSativa]

love it