Ghost

[Mydriasis]

Sticky hands atop our sundial.
Gripping for control,
only to be defiled.

They didn't love me,
they just wanted money.

Gardens flowing with cellophane,
to assure me I've gone insane.

Losing myself in the moment,
to transcend the pain.
Forest's paved with cement,
only for personal gain.

Loser's never lose,
no battle can be won.
So here's to giving up,
and staring until blindness,
waiting for the sun.

[Mafoo]

i like it mang. all of it

[Mydriasis]

Thanks for reading. I'm more glad you liked it.

I find I write better when I write automaticly. But sometimes I just write just to write.

[vanilla]

don't think at all !! let youre pen do the talking, just let it out

[Mydriasis]

Why my thread? Huh? This has nothing to do with writing, or what anyone posted. Infact I'd call this spam.
Yep I've confirmed it, it's spam.
http://forum.shartak.com/index.php?a...rofile%3Bu=870 - proof

[Mafoo]

he calls 'em like he sees 'em