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Old 09-07-2009, 04:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Quiet.

Child,
ease your structured mind.
Close your eyes,
and lose the time.

Hush.

Love,
show him the trail,
where we can all be the nothing,
that is our every beginning.

Shhh.

Darling,
For this is our birth,
where we lay perfect and pure,
there is little grace in being sure.

Speak.

Stranger

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Old 09-08-2009, 03:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice, I like how child, love, and darling show the very affection for what was spoken. Yet from what I read it speaks volumes on how complex a situation can get when really all one needs to is relax and just look for a simple answer. At least thats what I got from it. Very good! I applaud you!
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Old 09-08-2009, 05:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks Rose! That's pretty much what it's all about. The messages in it were pretty much this

- We're all children(we all have parents ). And every child needs to be loved and taught.
- You have to let go of things to be on the path to second chance/healing.
- That your never tied down to anything that you can always be reborn to be something new no matter how tied up you get.

I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks PG as always
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