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05-03-2003, 02:03 PM
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YaHookan
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In the words of Malcolm Mcdowell in The Clockwork Orange, "long time no viddy little droogans".
Stop------ ---------- Stop your hate End your pain Watch your smile emerge again Halt your labels Kill the war Never leave you wanting more Leave your mind Become your dream Be that which you wish to seem. ------------------------------- As much as id like to hope people noticed that i fucked off for a while chances r u didnt since my contribution to the board has always been pretty fuckin poor, anyway 2 anyone who was thinkin "Thank fuck we got rid of that tosser." think again, im back with enough so-called "poems" to make you wish you were illiterate, so enjoy. ProbablyStoned
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05-04-2003, 04:19 AM
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YaHookan
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Hey why the negativeness!
Poetry can be as eloquent as fuck, but it counts for nothing if their isn't real emotion behind it - real feeling. Hey it doesn't hurt to think about the words carefully, and try and craft the poem - but hey if there's just no spark whats the point! I like it - keep writing - I always thought the idea of poetry was to express a concept to someone in a new light in a very short space of time - not to show how well you can manipulate language (although that may come in to it sometimes).
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05-05-2003, 12:11 PM
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YaHookan
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Theres no way i could write without the emotion behind it, i'm just too damn lazy to write for the sake of it. Negativeness?? theres a difference between being negative and sayin negative things, dont you think? I do but thats just me. cheers sweetsativa, i try.
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05-06-2003, 10:19 AM
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glad to see you back, im back again for a bit too...kinda
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