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05-18-2004, 09:28 AM
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YaHookan
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you grab hold of my pride
with your iron words you make my soul bleed and my insides hurt you drain all my sences till i cant breathe you clog all my veins till the purity leaves from deep in my core the pain will erode everything thats decent everything i know under my stomach the ashes will stir when your voice rises your anger gives birth : 
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05-18-2004, 11:19 AM
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"when your voice rises
your anger gives birth" Good poem... felt like there was more though. Definately effective at transmitting the heat and the flames.  Time for a toke  
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05-18-2004, 04:09 PM
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thank you
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-You're insane. Archie was not fucking Mister Weatherbee! -1)Now what the fuck do you call that?! 2)Intergalactic civil war. 1)GENTRIFICATION! -1) Fuck you. 2) Not even if you let me videotape it. -1)Suitor #2, if we were making whoopee wh- 2)What's whoopee? 1)Um, well, being intimate. 2)You mean fucking? -Brodie:there that was romantic....passiona te, yeah Renee:no Brodie that was too little too late Brodie:too little? you said it was a good size! Renee:the effort you retard, the effort was |
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