please have a listen/look !!

vanilla · 10-12-2010, 11:04 PM

i've posted my myspace here before, but this is relatively new, please give it a once over, thanks

YouTube - lucid

vanilla · 10-25-2010, 08:10 PM

92 views and nothing? come on

**Mafoo** · 10-25-2010, 09:30 PM

gonna smoke 1st and then i shall speak my mind

**mothernature** · 10-26-2010, 03:20 AM

What do you want? The honest truth or a polite response?

farmergiles · 10-26-2010, 04:15 AM

Pretty mellow. The snare shouts a bit.

**SageTree** · 10-26-2010, 06:55 AM

Yea man..... I let it play in the back ground while I was talking with a friend.

I like it, but I'd bring the orchestrations to the front and lower the snare..... come to think of it... maybe a little more bass drum/kick action to vary the snare and let some space develop. That could be option '2' for dealing with the forwardness of the snare. I like all the stuff I hear in the back ground.... the egg shaker could die out a little, and as I said, in favour of a "dum...da-dumdum" bass kick. A little more 'funky drummer' if you will

**Mafoo** · 10-26-2010, 10:53 AM

i think the title is pretty fitting, and i did enjoy it. i actually forgot to come back here last night after my smoke break.

i personally dont think the snare is all bad its nice n snappy. if you're trying to "fix" it, you could lower the lever slightly and maybe put some airy reverb (or maybe a plate reverb if you dont want as much space) on it to help it sit better.

overall, i like the progression of the song. the bass n drums remind me of the song "sola sistim" by underworld

any plans to put some vocals on this?

mr.nobody · 10-26-2010, 12:54 PM

nice track bro, you probably don't wanna hear it but I could/would definitely feel it better if someone got on this track and spit a few bars. .. of like some real introspective stuff haha. . ..I like it.

vanilla · 10-26-2010, 10:24 PM

thanks everyone, mafoo im not necessarily looking to 'fix' anything just some constructive criticism or comments. on further listening the snare does stand out a bit, and i am not against putting vocals to this i just dont know anyone off hand yet, whether its rapping or singing

Black · 11-02-2010, 05:01 PM

honest truth bro, this fucking sucks. get your ears out of your ass and make some music that moves

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SageTree ~Kalyāṇa-mitrā~ Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: In Love Posts: 23,414 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 13,070 Thanked 6,768 Times in 4,664 Posts	Yea man..... I let it play in the back ground while I was talking with a friend. I like it, but I'd bring the orchestrations to the front and lower the snare..... come to think of it... maybe a little more bass drum/kick action to vary the snare and let some space develop. That could be option '2' for dealing with the forwardness of the snare. I like all the stuff I hear in the back ground.... the egg shaker could die out a little, and as I said, in favour of a "dum...da-dumdum" bass kick. A little more 'funky drummer' if you will __________________ "What's oppressive is letting your life be confined by old definitions of what everything is." -Zen Meister my_scatterheart YaHooka is.... Cannabis lovers from around the world pulling up a comfy chair, picking up a vaporizer, a bong, a brownie, a pipe, or a joint, getting high, stoned, buzzed or healthy. Uniting our minds in conversation...While Portraying a Positive Image of marijuana and marijuana users to the world. Treat your fellow YaHookans with kindness,respect and tolerance.

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Mafoo nice daze Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: the anguish of anticipated transformation Posts: 5,975 Thanks: 3,776 Thanked 2,652 Times in 1,698 Posts	i think the title is pretty fitting, and i did enjoy it. i actually forgot to come back here last night after my smoke break. i personally dont think the snare is all bad its nice n snappy. if you're trying to "fix" it, you could lower the lever slightly and maybe put some airy reverb (or maybe a plate reverb if you dont want as much space) on it to help it sit better. overall, i like the progression of the song. the bass n drums remind me of the song "sola sistim" by underworld any plans to put some vocals on this? __________________ PLUR For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return

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vanilla the cunning linguist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: 514 Posts: 5,349 Thanks: 11 Thanked 138 Times in 92 Posts	thanks everyone, mafoo im not necessarily looking to 'fix' anything just some constructive criticism or comments. on further listening the snare does stand out a bit, and i am not against putting vocals to this i just dont know anyone off hand yet, whether its rapping or singing __________________

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