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Obligtory Pompous Mental Spew
When free will becomes free form
and we all travel so fluidly liquid can be boxed into cute packages for only so long Becoming one without consequences leads one down a delightful path while walking w/ those who share the secrets of the journey A million thoughts lay awake restless tired of running thru a mind pulled in directions without axi's Can we all just confront our truths before the lies become so common that hot air is the only travel we seek Looking forward to reclaiming the past makes the days travel so fast making peace with the fact that its not the same plain and uneventful is the fate of those displaced Speculation kills the messenger alarming as it is there are proper times for every bombshell Showing no interest yields interest our prophets were all wrong when they laid out the future determined Determining how to spend the future leaves us broke and penniless looking towards the past
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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i dig, it's just precise enough to know what youre on about yet vague enough to let you fill in some spaces youreself and not have it completely set for everyone that reads it
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Biblioburro...
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Word up nilla, thx for the prups. I never read my own work beyond proofing, but this one got me.
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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Nice stuff Mr. G.
Could ya drum up another? I like the part about consequences.....
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Biblioburro...
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Part 2....
Can I even begin to say what i want to without you turning to run One foot forward Two steps back Falling for old faults memories bystander We all wish for the past to be as great as the futures we plan Everything comes easy while avoiding the truth looking the other way as deception talks Requiring anything else but what we've been has become a question answered before asked Common perception finds a way to make itself the truth that is most fittingly false Tossed away when boredom shows entertainment is sense of perspective And when you have no perspective of your own boredom is a friend unwanted.
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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I swear if u post part 3...I will cry!
Powerful words you have there Mr. G!
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Biblioburro...
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a prelude, with an epilogue, or maybe something entirely different...
without scapegoats of our own faults will tear us down blaming, excusing yourself from looking into the mirror mirrors can be glorified if broken seven yrs is a long time gone look more at who you've become than who you want to be be all i want is to be me is beyond the point excused bruised egos and feelings left in limbo speaking is easy when your seeking weather or not you make an ass out of yourself shan't be a concern concerns melt away only to come back magnified anti personal, borderline loner loan point of view and the clouds may part sunshine is the day given a chance, may we be given a chance to write a story while living it is hard enough tougher still w/ no one to fact find and point prove lies are only truths we didn't force, courses run like oceans everyone floats down the same stream, & we're all drowning, drowning, drowning
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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Quote:
I really enjoy your work. Your words do more than speak.
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Biblioburro...
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Thank you for your kind words pharm...
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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There's alot of thought that went into alot of the stories/poetry down here in the Joint.
I use it as an outlet to all the ramblings that have troubled me past and present! I really admire those who contribute their thoughts/feelings and fears of the world around them. Words may very well be the root to one's soul!
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been bored... something i found in my notebook and have been playing with
Reflections warp in mirrors shattered given up to time as if missed by today memories felt differently by those involved trust an issue of pain refracted tomorrow comes knowing that the landscape deserted a million little pieces of the same story altered
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" Last edited by Grieves; 03-01-2009 at 08:25 PM. |
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honesty a causalty
of time displaced pushing away while grasping for a way future limited only by ressessions soul felt direction the space placed by those closest....
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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When the past come crashing back
bringing with it the warmth of feelings, felt The future stands no chance of warming thoughts, on ice Where in, with out time we lay motionless asking for a breath of fresh air Retuning to lost causes keeps us spiraling into our own minds It's all so fluid when mistakes have been made reflexes snap back against motion trained We have felt things that may be misconstrued, misinterpred mistaken and missed Can we count on our faults to save us from the current pulling down to recapture flashes of glitter, glistening like gold For we are all fools for someone else's survival Can we adapt constructively so that movement onward is as it should be, Fate Determined....
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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Biblioburro...
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weird, i don't recall posting that last one...
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"And no matter what they said
dollar is not your friend and it's the feelings that are hard to know are the feelings that all come slow No matter what they said dollar is not your friend and these feelings that so hard to know are the feelings that wont let go No don't let go, till you find a home World Unite and I'll love you forever" |
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