ionlylooklazy

any poets on yahooka? feel free to share


are the any resources available online for those aspiring to become an amateur poet?

specifically, i am looking for information on the physical structure of various formats (like haiku's, ect)

&posturpoems

Bearsy

Dude every other thread in the Writer's Joint is poetry.

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ionlylooklazy

there once was a girl that i called friend
we played littlebigplanet to no end
i started to yell and shout
acted a great big lout
and i broke our friendship beyond mend

ionlylooklazy

my love for you is something true
cause nothing makes me feel so blue
as not being able to talk to you

ionlylooklazy

id like to be with you, through and through
you're really special, one of a few
i would like another chance
no need to take off your pants
but i wish you werent such a jew

SAVAGE

anything longer and more meaningful?

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What you see is what you get/ never the less/ i do my best/ to maintain in this world of stress/ Cus' this world aint no joke/ and your destiny is what you provoke... (-Rob Savage-)

Taste me you will see/More is all you need. You're dedicated to/How I'm killing you. Come crawling faster/ Obey your Master/Your life burns faster/ Obey your Master/ Master.
(METALLICA)

TheGoodGravy

I feel something is coming
It’s not just the wind
Rather something colder
A darkness from within
Is taking one step closer
To memories replaying

Mistakes and love letters
Skeletons in our closet
The past takes a step ahead
Light is shed on the secret
Causing a cynical dread
To hide the greedy pleasures

We regret what we have done
Now here's a hefty reminder
For public eyes to be seen
Of how we were the liars
The flame and the gasoline
The bullets in a killer's gun

Humans are prone to mistakes
But when thrown into the press
One mistake is now murder
Now with no second chance
Your presence is now a burden
That's when darkness awakes

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If your boss is being an asshole, your parents are being unruly pricks, your spouse is becoming a major pain in the ass, or you are just annoyed by something. I want you to remember one word:

Dynamite

............That is all...........

ionlylooklazy

hey thats pretty good gravy, thanks for contributing



@savage, these are just little dailies i like sending to some friends. ill update with some more in a bit

frozen diamonds

"Islands"

Your heart is the sun and I watched it sink into the sea
To fill the dark corners with the light of love between you and me
You warmed the cold water with your white hot soul
Then we ascended to heaven, rapidly growing old
I watched you melt into gold right before my eyes
And I stared into yours and they were as expansive as the skies

This is how I lost my voice
Then again nothing’s more peaceful than not having choice

When I wake up and you first speak to me, that’ll break the night
Then I’ll know everything I’ve done has been right
I won’t h ave to worry, after all who am I to decide
We’re all just humans, to live or to die
I love you and I can’t wait to see the day
The world crumbles and everything fades away
That’s honest and beautiful
When everything is empty, I will feel whole

This is how I lost my voice
Then again nothing’s more peaceful than not having choice

But for now we must love and go about our lives
Our trivial affairs, what we don’t realize
Is one day when it will finally be time
We will not be the ones to decide

This is how we lost our voice
Then again nothing’s more peaceful than not having choice

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you'll kiss me and I'll surely wake up

ionlylooklazy

heres a cool website to post your poetry:

GotPoetry.com > > News, Events, Articles and more


heres my haiku for today:

bird songs permeate
singing of love, yet to be
secretly, me too

frozen diamonds

cool your tapes, child
I know it’s been a long while
but for the sake of this man-made earth, wild
will the wind blow on me and miles
down to wolves running up to sunset
feeling like a lost king
mustaches on everything
dripping off nozzles
come on, like you’re like that -
psh, honey, I know you like you never did
and that’s what it’s worth it
so just jewel it up and smile
forget about the faces
angers eating races
of laces, counting down to the days you
fall up from the castle
covered in ivy
like you’re floating on God’s eye
shining in the shrine and
bleeding out silver
to all the little children
poor in a village
like their brains are made of horse shit
feeding on sweet mint
that grows in nearby forests
from God’s palm they work it
into golden ridges
in rings and other things
to keep something else busy
while they fix up with inner visions
to think it was a miracle
slipping on truthful
like it was written in the Bible
choking up handfuls
and playing with mantles
will they go to chant or
get all black and swollen
melt into their dinner
fall into a dreamer
breaking all the seamer
like it was trying to keep her
from leaving

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you'll kiss me and I'll surely wake up

ionlylooklazy

thanks for contributing frozen diamonds, nice work

heres a couple more from me:

GotPoetry.com > > Poems - bird songs permeate
bird songs permeate
singing of love yet to be
secretly me too

GotPoetry.com > > Poems - for a girl
there once was a girl, sweet to the bone
who sometimes thought she was all alone
but it’s not the case
for with a straight face
I say people love you; this is known

Mull D

A very old man at the store with his wife
I held the door and he gave me advice
"Don't marry a bitch," he mentioned it twice
Thank you old man, you just saved my night