Transit haiku

**SageTree** · 03-18-2009, 03:34 PM

I got dressed too late
Now I'm going to miss the bus
Damn it there is goes.

Garbage bag of clothes
All these goods weighed down heavy
Going to the thirft store

Time for the next bus
But here I sit typing this
Sorry yall, gotta run!

**Mafoo** · 03-18-2009, 08:29 PM

i meant to comment this yesterday when i read it
i cant say i know you personally but for some reason this gives me a good idea of your personality.
i like it

**SageTree** · 03-18-2009, 08:41 PM

You mean this afternoon or are you reading the cards again?

Thanks for the critique'

Annoyance swells and reason takes over to centre.
Kind acts doesn't make you on time for the bus.
I had a really go talk with the next bus driver, the one that I caught!

03-18-2009, 03:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
SageTree ~Kalyāṇa-mitrā~ Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: In Love Posts: 22,611 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 11,486 Thanked 5,709 Times in 4,024 Posts	Transit haiku I got dressed too late Now I'm going to miss the bus Damn it there is goes. Garbage bag of clothes All these goods weighed down heavy Going to the thirft store Time for the next bus But here I sit typing this Sorry yall, gotta run! __________________ YaHooka is.... Cannabis lovers from around the world pulling up a comfy chair, picking up a vaporizer, a bong, a brownie, a pipe, or a joint, getting high, stoned, buzzed or healthy. Uniting our minds in conversation...While Portraying a Positive Image of marijuana and marijuana users to the world. Treat your fellow YaHookans with kindness,respect and tolerance. "We're not here to judge what's good from bad, But to do the things that are right."

03-18-2009, 08:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mafoo nice daze Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: the anguish of anticipated transformation Posts: 5,962 Thanks: 3,491 Thanked 2,356 Times in 1,540 Posts	i meant to comment this yesterday when i read it i cant say i know you personally but for some reason this gives me a good idea of your personality. i like it __________________ PLUR For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return

03-18-2009, 08:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
SageTree ~Kalyāṇa-mitrā~ Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: In Love Posts: 22,611 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 11,486 Thanked 5,709 Times in 4,024 Posts	You mean this afternoon or are you reading the cards again? Thanks for the critique' Annoyance swells and reason takes over to centre. Kind acts doesn't make you on time for the bus. I had a really go talk with the next bus driver, the one that I caught! __________________ YaHooka is.... Cannabis lovers from around the world pulling up a comfy chair, picking up a vaporizer, a bong, a brownie, a pipe, or a joint, getting high, stoned, buzzed or healthy. Uniting our minds in conversation...While Portraying a Positive Image of marijuana and marijuana users to the world. Treat your fellow YaHookans with kindness,respect and tolerance. "We're not here to judge what's good from bad, But to do the things that are right."

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