Transit haiku

**SageTree** · 03-18-2009, 02:34 PM

I got dressed too late
Now I'm going to miss the bus
Damn it there is goes.

Garbage bag of clothes
All these goods weighed down heavy
Going to the thirft store

Time for the next bus
But here I sit typing this
Sorry yall, gotta run!

**Mafoo** · 03-18-2009, 07:29 PM

i meant to comment this yesterday when i read it
i cant say i know you personally but for some reason this gives me a good idea of your personality.
i like it

**SageTree** · 03-18-2009, 07:41 PM

You mean this afternoon or are you reading the cards again?

Thanks for the critique'

Annoyance swells and reason takes over to centre.
Kind acts doesn't make you on time for the bus.
I had a really go talk with the next bus driver, the one that I caught!

03-18-2009, 02:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
SageTree ~Kalyāṇa-mitrā~ Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: In Love Posts: 23,414 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 13,070 Thanked 6,767 Times in 4,664 Posts	Transit haiku I got dressed too late Now I'm going to miss the bus Damn it there is goes. Garbage bag of clothes All these goods weighed down heavy Going to the thirft store Time for the next bus But here I sit typing this Sorry yall, gotta run! __________________ "What's oppressive is letting your life be confined by old definitions of what everything is." -Zen Meister my_scatterheart YaHooka is.... Cannabis lovers from around the world pulling up a comfy chair, picking up a vaporizer, a bong, a brownie, a pipe, or a joint, getting high, stoned, buzzed or healthy. Uniting our minds in conversation...While Portraying a Positive Image of marijuana and marijuana users to the world. Treat your fellow YaHookans with kindness,respect and tolerance.

03-18-2009, 07:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mafoo nice daze Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: the anguish of anticipated transformation Posts: 5,973 Thanks: 3,775 Thanked 2,651 Times in 1,697 Posts	i meant to comment this yesterday when i read it i cant say i know you personally but for some reason this gives me a good idea of your personality. i like it __________________ PLUR For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return

03-18-2009, 07:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
SageTree ~Kalyāṇa-mitrā~ Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: In Love Posts: 23,414 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 13,070 Thanked 6,767 Times in 4,664 Posts	You mean this afternoon or are you reading the cards again? Thanks for the critique' Annoyance swells and reason takes over to centre. Kind acts doesn't make you on time for the bus. I had a really go talk with the next bus driver, the one that I caught! __________________ "What's oppressive is letting your life be confined by old definitions of what everything is." -Zen Meister my_scatterheart YaHooka is.... Cannabis lovers from around the world pulling up a comfy chair, picking up a vaporizer, a bong, a brownie, a pipe, or a joint, getting high, stoned, buzzed or healthy. Uniting our minds in conversation...While Portraying a Positive Image of marijuana and marijuana users to the world. Treat your fellow YaHookans with kindness,respect and tolerance.

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