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Old 04-06-2009, 10:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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deep breaths

the horn players
blow their soul
and the drummers
beat their drums

the people dance
and drink and
watch and listen

but in this moment
i just sit and think
of all my sins
my mistakes
my heartaches
and my past

forever midnight
the world is flawed
and beautiful
all the same
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Old 04-08-2009, 06:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Its sets a scene, has some depth and finally resolution. This is what I feel when I read it.
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