sundazed

vanilla · 06-15-2009, 01:31 PM

every word unspoken
is a relic of this
restrained ambition

this need to give
and give more
until it all makes sense
to no one but yourself

this need to take
everything and change it
make it physical
and real, in surreality

these hands breathe
and shake and write
and live for more
but want nothing else
than to just be

**Mafoo** · 06-15-2009, 01:51 PM

i like the way you write.
very nice

vanilla · 06-15-2009, 03:57 PM

thanks

Mydriasis · 06-15-2009, 06:45 PM

I like this one.

06-15-2009, 01:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
vanilla the cunning linguist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: 514 Posts: 5,330 Thanks: 9 Thanked 115 Times in 80 Posts	sundazed every word unspoken is a relic of this restrained ambition this need to give and give more until it all makes sense to no one but yourself this need to take everything and change it make it physical and real, in surreality these hands breathe and shake and write and live for more but want nothing else than to just be __________________

06-15-2009, 01:51 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mafoo nice daze Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: the anguish of anticipated transformation Posts: 5,962 Thanks: 3,491 Thanked 2,356 Times in 1,540 Posts	i like the way you write. very nice __________________ PLUR For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return

06-15-2009, 03:57 PM	#3 (permalink)
vanilla the cunning linguist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: 514 Posts: 5,330 Thanks: 9 Thanked 115 Times in 80 Posts	thanks __________________

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06-15-2009, 06:45 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mydriasis Do Not Resuscitate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,317 Thanks: 840 Thanked 431 Times in 298 Posts	I like this one.

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