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Old 08-30-2009, 02:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Ghost

Sticky hands atop our sundial.
Gripping for control,
only to be defiled.

They didn't love me,
they just wanted money.

Gardens flowing with cellophane,
to assure me I've gone insane.

Losing myself in the moment,
to transcend the pain.
Forest's paved with cement,
only for personal gain.

Loser's never lose,
no battle can be won.
So here's to giving up,
and staring until blindness,
waiting for the sun.
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Old 08-30-2009, 03:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i like it mang. all of it
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Old 08-30-2009, 07:33 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for reading. I'm more glad you liked it.

I find I write better when I write automaticly. But sometimes I just write just to write.
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Old 08-30-2009, 10:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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don't think at all !! let youre pen do the talking, just let it out
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Why my thread? Huh? This has nothing to do with writing, or what anyone posted. Infact I'd call this spam.
Yep I've confirmed it, it's spam.
http://forum.shartak.com/index.php?a...rofile%3Bu=870 - proof
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Old 08-31-2009, 08:26 PM   #6 (permalink)
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