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Old 08-31-2009, 10:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
Do Not Resuscitate
 
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I can never look you in the eye.
You can't seem to fathom why.
Perhaps your wasting your life,
or perhaps it's me telling a lie.

Whichever branch has the closest fruit,
is the limb to target.
A slave to your necessity,
for reward and simplicity.

You aren't entitled to anything,
especially not me,
maybe one day you'll see;
Eye to Eye;
Me,
I and I.


There's no reason to look out,
when you haven't looked with-in.
Open your mind and take yourself for a spin.
Your purity may overcome your ego's petty grin.
Or maybe you'll escape only to come back.
and wreak the same worn out havoc.
Yet again.
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Old 09-01-2009, 11:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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as a person who trips, i notice that your writing kind of alludes to alot of themes i associate with psychedelics.

i and i

open your mind and take yourself for a spin

good stuff bro, im gonna have to take a crack at writing again one of these days
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Old 09-01-2009, 11:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Do it! it's fun!

I do find myself writing a lot about religious experiences especially lately, I'm not sure exactly why. maybe it's just always on my mind haha.
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