Love poem?

Mydriasis · 09-11-2009, 11:47 PM

So lets gamble all our money,
on a child-hood dream.
Let's turn around and love each other,
over some mint ice-cream.

I promise to not get caught on numbers,
when we lay down counting sheep.
We can still find peace here,
let's talk ourselves to sleep.

Yes, I'd gamble everything,
on a child-hood dream.
You have to know what I mean.

I've gambled my everything,
to open myself up again,
and let you know how much you mean.

I'm a sap sometimes it's really sad haha.
Maybe you guys'll like it.

Mydriasis · 09-12-2009, 09:13 PM

Lol it's always my threads that this happens to.

Mydriasis · 09-13-2009, 02:27 PM

Wow more spam...

Mydriasis · 09-13-2009, 09:55 PM

omfg more spam someone lock this thread or something lol.

Crucified Rose · 09-13-2009, 10:19 PM

Very nice! I like it! A little short but no less straight to the point. Like the style just make it longer! hahaha over mint ice cream? Eww I don't like mint flavored ice cream. But hey good poem no less!

Mydriasis · 09-13-2009, 11:48 PM

haha thanks rose. I love mint ice-cream. I tried to use it as a symbol haha, but mostly I was stoned and it flew out.

It's nice to see another active writer on here. We have a few but there could always be more, so welcome back.

09-11-2009, 11:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
Mydriasis Do Not Resuscitate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,317 Thanks: 840 Thanked 431 Times in 298 Posts	Love poem? So lets gamble all our money, on a child-hood dream. Let's turn around and love each other, over some mint ice-cream. I promise to not get caught on numbers, when we lay down counting sheep. We can still find peace here, let's talk ourselves to sleep. Yes, I'd gamble everything, on a child-hood dream. You have to know what I mean. I've gambled my everything, to open myself up again, and let you know how much you mean. I'm a sap sometimes it's really sad haha. Maybe you guys'll like it. __________________ ۞

09-12-2009, 09:13 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mydriasis Do Not Resuscitate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,317 Thanks: 840 Thanked 431 Times in 298 Posts	Lol it's always my threads that this happens to. __________________ ۞

09-13-2009, 02:27 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mydriasis Do Not Resuscitate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,317 Thanks: 840 Thanked 431 Times in 298 Posts	Wow more spam... __________________ ۞

09-13-2009, 09:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mydriasis Do Not Resuscitate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,317 Thanks: 840 Thanked 431 Times in 298 Posts	omfg more spam someone lock this thread or something lol. __________________ ۞

09-13-2009, 10:19 PM	#5 (permalink)
Crucified Rose The Next Godsend Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 360 Thanks: 2 Thanked 11 Times in 9 Posts	Very nice! I like it! A little short but no less straight to the point. Like the style just make it longer! hahaha over mint ice cream? Eww I don't like mint flavored ice cream. But hey good poem no less! __________________ Im so cool, they call me CULO!!

09-13-2009, 11:48 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mydriasis Do Not Resuscitate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,317 Thanks: 840 Thanked 431 Times in 298 Posts	haha thanks rose. I love mint ice-cream. I tried to use it as a symbol haha, but mostly I was stoned and it flew out. It's nice to see another active writer on here. We have a few but there could always be more, so welcome back. __________________ ۞

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