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09-19-2009, 07:47 PM
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Do Not Resuscitate
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Breaking Reaction
I know that,
Restless currents will conquer you. You can stand in defiance, follow your heart, or be tranquilized in your apathy, Your moment comes, your fault-line is pending. Half way to the crest now. Do you: Grasp onto your water? Dive under-neath? Or wait to see where-ever it is, that you will be?
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09-19-2009, 11:20 PM
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I'm inspired on a daily basis, a kind of recovery from seeing new faces. I live my life and leave no traces, still I look for caring embraces. This is confusing in many of cases. It's like claustrophobia in wide open spaces. Or tying a shoe that has no laces.
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09-20-2009, 05:47 PM
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The Next Godsend
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Very nice! I like the whole "decision time" attitude you gave this poem. An excellent addition to your short poem collection I say.
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