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vanilla · 10-28-2009, 07:29 PM

blink
blink an eye
and it happens so slowly
between the spaces
of more
inside this
blink
no thinking
no breathing
no eating
no feeling
blink
an arms race
for power
for saving face
for pride
for spite
blink
blink like a man
blink like a woman
blink like a child
it is a wash of noise
of everything
a flash of brilliance
if you can catch it
blink
blink like all those before
blink like those unexisted
blink like you wanted it
like you had it
and you knew what to do
blink like you never have

Angelo · 12-10-2009, 04:39 AM

realy good vanilla.
so simple and light, but still a good meaning

10-28-2009, 07:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
vanilla the cunning linguist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: 514 Posts: 5,330 Thanks: 9 Thanked 115 Times in 80 Posts	shared blink blink an eye and it happens so slowly between the spaces of more inside this blink no thinking no breathing no eating no feeling blink an arms race for power for saving face for pride for spite blink blink like a man blink like a woman blink like a child it is a wash of noise of everything a flash of brilliance if you can catch it blink blink like all those before blink like those unexisted blink like you wanted it like you had it and you knew what to do blink like you never have __________________

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12-10-2009, 04:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
Angelo YaHookan Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 50 Thanks: 0 Thanked 8 Times in 15 Posts	realy good vanilla. so simple and light, but still a good meaning

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