Just Finished my First Draft

The Rev · 02-28-2010, 05:50 PM

I'm writing a book on the subject of being and consciousness, and I just finished the first draft. Now, I have to go through it and flesh it out, weed it out, change it around, and so on. After that, I will have a draft ready for reading by others. I'd like some input at that stage, so if you're interested in reading it, PM me.

Thanks, to all those who care.

The Rev

**SageTree** · 02-28-2010, 08:38 PM

Congrates Rev!!!!!

Send that thang up thisa way!!!

Mental · 05-25-2010, 09:39 PM

I'll give it a read through Rev if you don't mind.

hijabihippie · 05-26-2010, 06:50 PM

Deal me in, dude!

Seriously, Rev, congratulations.

verklingen · 05-27-2010, 06:30 AM

so do i have to be as old as you to get around to MY book?

congrats rev that's quite an accomplishment

Prophet Saddam · 05-27-2010, 10:39 AM

I wanna be the first to buy your book.

Keep us updated.

The Rev · 05-27-2010, 11:44 AM

You can paypal me some money right now, saddam.

I'm about 1/2 way through the second draft, now. I've added some stuff, taken some stuff away, etc. I expect to be finished in the next couple of months. I will let you all know when it's done if you'd like to read through it. I need some feedback to make sure that it all makes sense, and that the ideas are clearly presented.

Thanks, everyone!

The Rev

05-27-2010, 11:45 AM

I'll read it too..if you wanna pm moi.

my_scatterheart · 05-28-2010, 06:36 PM

Me too, Revvy

farmergiles · 05-31-2010, 03:20 AM

So that's why you keep dropping philosophy bombs in your posts.

That's awesome. Takes a lot of discipline.

John F. Kerry · 05-31-2010, 03:25 PM

awesome rev, id love to check it out too!

06-01-2010, 03:16 PM

I hope you get alot of cash per word very soon!

The Rev · 06-01-2010, 03:44 PM

From your lips to God's ears, turm.

The Rev

06-01-2010, 03:54 PM

hELL YEAH!

The_Jester · 06-03-2010, 08:08 AM

will you autograph my copy?

hijabihippie · 06-03-2010, 09:49 AM

See, Rev, I'm not the only one who wants an autographed copy!

02-28-2010, 05:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
The Rev Clear Light Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In my head, somewhere. Posts: 17,867 Thanks: 5,019 Thanked 5,421 Times in 2,865 Posts	Just Finished my First Draft I'm writing a book on the subject of being and consciousness, and I just finished the first draft. Now, I have to go through it and flesh it out, weed it out, change it around, and so on. After that, I will have a draft ready for reading by others. I'd like some input at that stage, so if you're interested in reading it, PM me. Thanks, to all those who care. The Rev __________________ Budforce - My Friend August 29, 1973- May 25, 2012

02-28-2010, 08:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
SageTree ~Kalyāṇa-mitrā~ Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: In Love Posts: 23,414 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 13,070 Thanked 6,769 Times in 4,664 Posts	Congrates Rev!!!!! Send that thang up thisa way!!! __________________ "What's oppressive is letting your life be confined by old definitions of what everything is." -Zen Meister my_scatterheart YaHooka is.... Cannabis lovers from around the world pulling up a comfy chair, picking up a vaporizer, a bong, a brownie, a pipe, or a joint, getting high, stoned, buzzed or healthy. Uniting our minds in conversation...While Portraying a Positive Image of marijuana and marijuana users to the world. Treat your fellow YaHookans with kindness,respect and tolerance.

05-25-2010, 09:39 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mental Remember Rule #33! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Arizona Posts: 246 Thanks: 2 Thanked 17 Times in 18 Posts	I'll give it a read through Rev if you don't mind. __________________ In the land of the Normal, I choose to be me. In the land of the Confined, I choose to be free. In the land of the Oppressed, I choose to to enlightened. To those that understand I greet you hand to hand, for in this world, it is we few that choose to stand. Welcome to the new world, where the inmates are free, and the world isn't as it used to be. Welcome to the new life you will begin to live, free your mind and the rest will follow.

05-27-2010, 06:30 AM	#5 (permalink)
verklingen Radical Dreamer Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: texas Posts: 8,005 Thanks: 811 Thanked 1,491 Times in 946 Posts	so do i have to be as old as you to get around to MY book? congrats rev that's quite an accomplishment __________________ “Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle.” rip matt

05-27-2010, 11:44 AM	#7 (permalink)
The Rev Clear Light Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In my head, somewhere. Posts: 17,867 Thanks: 5,019 Thanked 5,421 Times in 2,865 Posts	You can paypal me some money right now, saddam. I'm about 1/2 way through the second draft, now. I've added some stuff, taken some stuff away, etc. I expect to be finished in the next couple of months. I will let you all know when it's done if you'd like to read through it. I need some feedback to make sure that it all makes sense, and that the ideas are clearly presented. Thanks, everyone! The Rev __________________ Budforce - My Friend August 29, 1973- May 25, 2012

05-26-2010, 06:50 PM	#4 (permalink)
hijabihippie YaHookan Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,481 Thanks: 1,152 Thanked 655 Times in 515 Posts	Deal me in, dude! Seriously, Rev, congratulations.

05-27-2010, 10:39 AM	#6 (permalink)
Prophet Saddam YaHookan 2011 Winner Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: CA, fuck yeah Posts: 16,345 Blog Entries: 11 Thanks: 3,702 Thanked 719 Times in 482 Posts	I wanna be the first to buy your book. Keep us updated.

05-27-2010, 11:45 AM	#8 (permalink)
turmaline Guest Posts: n/a	I'll read it too..if you wanna pm moi.

05-28-2010, 06:36 PM	#9 (permalink)
my_scatterheart Today, I am alive. Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 3,553 Thanks: 1,487 Thanked 3,328 Times in 1,870 Posts	Me too, Revvy __________________ Be mindful even if your mind is full. -J. De La Vega

05-31-2010, 03:20 AM	#10 (permalink)
farmergiles Yahookan Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Sick of the hatred and the lies Posts: 7,807 Thanks: 2,285 Thanked 3,750 Times in 2,554 Posts	So that's why you keep dropping philosophy bombs in your posts. That's awesome. Takes a lot of discipline. __________________ Cultivate a stoic calmness *Fuck the Monkeys* Every Kind of Vice

06-01-2010, 03:16 PM	#12 (permalink)
turmaline Guest Posts: n/a	I hope you get alot of cash per word very soon!

06-01-2010, 03:44 PM	#13 (permalink)
The Rev Clear Light Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In my head, somewhere. Posts: 17,867 Thanks: 5,019 Thanked 5,421 Times in 2,865 Posts	From your lips to God's ears, turm. The Rev __________________ Budforce - My Friend August 29, 1973- May 25, 2012

06-01-2010, 03:54 PM	#14 (permalink)
turmaline Guest Posts: n/a	hELL YEAH!

06-03-2010, 08:08 AM	#15 (permalink)
The_Jester The Fool Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 365 Thanks: 239 Thanked 178 Times in 98 Posts	will you autograph my copy? __________________ In LOVING kindness, The forum fool.

06-03-2010, 09:49 AM	#16 (permalink)
hijabihippie YaHookan Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,481 Thanks: 1,152 Thanked 655 Times in 515 Posts	See, Rev, I'm not the only one who wants an autographed copy!

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