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Second Draft is Ready!
I just finished cleaning up the second draft of my book, and if anyone would like to read it over, I'd love to get some feedback.
The main areas I'd like to hear about are 1) Is it clear and understandable? 2) Do you see any problems/errors in the logic of the arguments presented? 3) Any questions that were raised by reading it that were not answered? If you want to read it, email me at disrespectinc@yahoo. com and I will email you back a PDF copy of the manuscript. Thanks in advance, for both your willingness to help me get this book dialed in, and all the support you gave me as I worked on it. It is ALL really appreciated!  The Rev
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07-06-2010, 01:07 PM
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Today, I am alive.
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yo go into your sent folder and resend it to me homefry. I fuckin forgot to save it to my hd.
yeahhhhhhh do it
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07-06-2010, 01:23 PM
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07-06-2010, 08:32 PM
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Today, I am alive.
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OMG THANKS DOOD YOURE LIKE SO SPEEDYSPEEDERSON ON THAT SHIT
no really, thanks. 
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07-08-2010, 08:52 PM
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I just noticed this now!!! I'm stoked!
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07-09-2010, 07:50 PM
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Going through 'Karma' as we speak!
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07-10-2010, 07:45 AM
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Edit: Got your email, I'll start on it tonight!
Would it be cool if I passed this on to a few friends who I think would be interested?
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07-10-2010, 11:15 AM
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I'd prefer if you didn't, at least for now. I just want feedback right now, so I can make any last minute changes prior to submission for publication. Once it's submitted, and rejected a bunch of times, then it should be okay.
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07-10-2010, 11:42 AM
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I completely dig.
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09-01-2010, 04:59 PM
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Just sent it to a literary agent
I made a few changes to the original draft, and submitted it. Now, I just gotta wait patiently by the phone for fame and fortune to call...
The Rev
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12-07-2010, 03:09 AM
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Weeding the Garden.~
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