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Old 03-11-2011, 10:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Writing dialogue

I don't know how many of you guys write stories and the like, but does anyone have any tips on writing dialogue?
I'm trying to write a script with a friend, and the story is coming along fine, but we just can't write good dialogue to save our lives.
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Old 03-12-2011, 01:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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try reading what you have out loud and deciding how stupid/fake it sounds. might help if you have friends read it while you listen carefully. if this is your only problem you don't have a lot to worry about.

i don't write dialogue so take this advice with salt
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Also, write what you know.

Base your characters off the mannerisms of people you know and/or how they'd react to a given situation.
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