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You Look Like the Poem I've Always Wanted to Write But Never Could
You look like the poem
I've always wanted to write but never could. I'd use grand words to describe the way your eyes shine when the sun hits them just right. I could write for days about your hair and the way that it feels and days more on it's enchanting smell. I'd go on and on about your milky skin how it makes me shiver when it brushes against mine. But the right words don't exist. I could talk about your smile and how just imagining it makes one appear on my face. Or the way your smell transports me from wherever we are, to a blissful place far away from everything. And how when you kiss me deeply it makes me weak in the knees and strong in the heart. But the right words still don't exist. So for now, I'll just call you Beautiful. Until they invent some better words. Maybe then I could write a poem about you.
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03-14-2011, 11:57 AM
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nice one bears
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03-14-2011, 12:05 PM
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That's the most flattering thing anyone has ever wrote about me Bearsy!!!
   Suriously.... nice one man
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03-14-2011, 01:09 PM
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Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Still not sure if I should show this to her, haha
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03-14-2011, 01:13 PM
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it sounds like its coming straight from a loving heart. ive written poems for girls, and none of them are still around lol. basically you have to give it to them to keep and do with it what they please because not every person knows what to do with a loving heart
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03-14-2011, 01:46 PM
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03-14-2011, 01:48 PM
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Found out last night that she(who claims she is into me) has been fooling around with one of my best friends for about a month at least.
This is the same friend that pushed us to get back together in the first place. Real nice.
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03-15-2011, 11:54 AM
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What the hell man ???!!!!! That ain't right
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Thanks guys. Idk what to do.
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This...
"I could talk about your smile and how just imagining it makes one appear on my face." ...is my favorite part. So sweet, it even made ME smile!
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