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Old 11-30-2011, 05:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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repeat

repeat like you do
youll be stuck forver
there is nothing to stop me
except me

and youve heard it before
but not like this.
do not steal light,
it blinds us.
believe not,
it destroys us.
know... know.
know what you do
be it
see it
taste it

atlas will shrug
under weight
under unknown languages
and landscapes

this is a scene
upon scenes
but dont be fooled
my scars show not
when i have been hurt
but when i let it

press repeat and
lay to rest youre illusions
and dreams
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Old 11-30-2011, 09:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i always enjoy hearing the words you post. any intention of prefacing this one?
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Old 12-01-2011, 04:37 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it man! It makes me reflect on the things I always repeat in life.
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Old 12-02-2011, 07:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks guys, really means a lot to have people read it.
there's not much to preface, i write automatically
i pretty much just dont write up to a point where i 'need' to write, and it all spills out, i try not to think at "all" and just WRITE so it spillls out and i say exactly what i need to, and it seems to work. i try to keep the pen constantly moving, and dont really have a set idea in mind when i am writing.

i think good writing, or anything artistic, stems from honesty with youreself, to acknowledge things you wouldn't normally be comfortable doing otherwise. you tell the truth as you see it and thats all there is to it.

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