Poem: Faded Wind

Crucified Rose · 09-01-2004, 04:17 PM

( This is a little poem I made up because I was bored, and well, yeah just read for yourself. I am NOT that good so I do expect flamers, hell thats all I truely expect by posting this, but none the less here is my poem biatches! )

Faded Wind

Tears in the wind as if we blessed our sins

Eyes that shatter truth and words that are hints

To a utophia of faith and a reality without lies

From a faded wind carrying those lips speaking those cries

From flesh to flesh and blood to blood

For once I hear a harmoney without that hating flood

No death no deception everythings but a correction

Souls seeking for that everlasting ressurection

Still torn from their mistakes and the connection

Still scared for life from their own hesitation

For the sun will cry and the moon will die

Raise to your feet but don't look to whats wrong just right

Then crucify the rose and the spirit

Let it suffer in its desolation but don't fully kill it

Take its tears then let it wash in the river

Vask in the flow makes your mind breath a shiver

For life is worth just the rose and the spirit

But we don't recognize it because we don't feel it

Faded Wind we are free to nothing but hate

Faded Wind maybe humans are just born as the slaves of fate

By: Crucified Rose

(Alright guys there you go, I wrote this poem a couple of years back, I don't really know what for, just sometimes I guess I hit peaks when I want to write and other times I tend to have writers block. Anyways hope you liked it, and if not then go ahead and flame you bunch of lazy bastards!! Alright im out peace!)

09-01-2004, 04:17 PM	#1 (permalink)
Crucified Rose The Next Godsend Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 360 Thanks: 2 Thanked 11 Times in 9 Posts	Poem: Faded Wind ( This is a little poem I made up because I was bored, and well, yeah just read for yourself. I am NOT that good so I do expect flamers, hell thats all I truely expect by posting this, but none the less here is my poem biatches! ) Faded Wind Tears in the wind as if we blessed our sins Eyes that shatter truth and words that are hints To a utophia of faith and a reality without lies From a faded wind carrying those lips speaking those cries From flesh to flesh and blood to blood For once I hear a harmoney without that hating flood No death no deception everythings but a correction Souls seeking for that everlasting ressurection Still torn from their mistakes and the connection Still scared for life from their own hesitation For the sun will cry and the moon will die Raise to your feet but don't look to whats wrong just right Then crucify the rose and the spirit Let it suffer in its desolation but don't fully kill it Take its tears then let it wash in the river Vask in the flow makes your mind breath a shiver For life is worth just the rose and the spirit But we don't recognize it because we don't feel it Faded Wind we are free to nothing but hate Faded Wind maybe humans are just born as the slaves of fate By: Crucified Rose (Alright guys there you go, I wrote this poem a couple of years back, I don't really know what for, just sometimes I guess I hit peaks when I want to write and other times I tend to have writers block. Anyways hope you liked it, and if not then go ahead and flame you bunch of lazy bastards!! Alright im out peace!)

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