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The Next Godsend
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For FlowerChild and anybody who wants to read!
Okay so im BORED as hell, and its 1:30 in the morning.. Its raining and well I was listening to that Eminem - Encore CD, and well I just HAD to do this. Tell me what you all think. Flames are even welcomed, hell I don't care I just think it will give FlowerChild a good laugh. Ha cause thats what we all need, a good laugh! Anyways this is a remake I thought up of, of the song "Eminem - Like Toy Soldiers" song.
Like Toy Soldiers - The Yahooka Remix (Dedicated for FlowerChild) Step by step, heart to heart, left right left We all fall down... [Chorus] Step by step, heart to heart, left right left We all fall down like toy soldiers Bit by bit, torn apart, we never win But the battle wages on for toy soldiers I'm supposed to be the poster who never blows his composure Even though I hold the weight of the whole world on my shoulders I am never supposed to show it, my crew ain't supposed to know it Even if it means goin' toe to toe with a HarryDickHead it don't matter I'd never drag them in fights that I can handle unless I absolutely have to I'm supposed to set an example I need to be the leader, my crew looks for me to guide 'em If some shit ever just pop off, I'm supposed to be beside 'em Now HarryDickHead said "She is a single lonely writer" There's a certain line you just don't cross and he crossed it I heard him say I am a liar and I just lost it It was crazy, this shit be way beyond some Pitfall and Ochoapeter shit And even though the battle was won, I feel like we lost it I spent too much energy on it, honestly I'm exhausted And I'm so caught in it I almost feel I'm the one who caused it This ain't what I'm in Yahooka for, it's not why I got in it That was never my object for someone to get flammed Why would I wanna destroy something I help build It wasn't my intentions, my intentions was good I went through the whole forum without ever mentionin' pay pal Now it's just out of respect for not runnin' my mouth And talkin' about something that I knew nothing about Plus Capt. Murphy told me stay out, this just wasn't my beef So I did, I just fell back, watched and gritted my teeth While he's all over the forum down talkin' to me Like fuck it i understand this is the internet And this shit just isn't none of my business But still knowin' this shit could pop off at any minute cuz [Chorus] There used to be a time when you could just make a post And wouldn't have to worry about one of your people becoming toast But now it's elevated cuz once you put someone's name in it The shit gets escalated, it ain't just words no more is it? It's a different ball game, callin' names and you aim to flamin We actually tried to stop the HarryDickHead and FlowerCunt beef from happenin' Me and Mominator had sat with him, kicked it and had a chat with him And asked him not to start it we weren't gonna go after him Until he started yappin' in posts how we fucked with him Fuck it GirlsHateMe smash 'em, mash 'em and let him have it Meanwhile my attention is pulled again in the same direction HarryDickHead comes in with the story of how I lied to him Has an erection for me and thinks that I'll be his girlfriend Tries to blow the dust off his mac and make himself look like an idiot But now he's fucked the game up cuz one of the ways I came up Was through the forum the same one that made me famous Now he still has got a grudge against me for nothin' Well fuck it, that mutherfucker can get it then, fuck him then But I'm so busy being pissed off I don't stop to think That I had blown a fuse over a prick that got no nookie And he's still pissed at me but its not like we don't mind We still have soldiers that's on the front line That's willing to post for us as soon as we give the orders Never to extort us, strictly to show they support us We'll maybe shout 'em out in a post or up in a chorus To show them we love 'em back and let 'em know how important it is To have Real Yahookan Soldiers up in our corners Their loyalty to us is worth more than any award is But I ain't tryna have none of my people hurt and flamed There ain't words that I can't think of a perfecter way to word it Then to just say that I love ya'll too much to see the accusations I'll walk away from it all before I let it go any further But don't get it twisted, it's not a plea that I'm coppin' I'm just willin' to be the bigger woman If ya'll can quit poppin' off at your jaws with the knockin' Cuz frankly I'm sick of talkin' I'm not gonna let someone else ruin my day as if I couldn't keep walkin' [Chorus] Step by step, heart to heart, left right left We all fall down like toy soldiers Bit by bit, torn apart, we never win But the battle wages on for toy soldiers Alright! hahaha there I am done. Let me remind you yes I have NO life and well I am EXTREMELY bored.. If you don't like how I remade the song then screw you and I would want to see you do better. Anyways main reason I did this was because also I think this whole FlowerChild lying thing was blown way out of proportion, yet I found it pretty interesting. Hahaha not really just entertaining, but none the less tell me what you all think! PEACE! |
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Yeah, good job man. Well done.
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an elementary near you
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hey guy maybe im missing something but umm "But don't get it twisted, it's not a plea that I'm coppin' I'm just willin' to be the bigger woman" wtf!?! i think im reading something wrong ohh well....anyways mofocka call me when you wake up so we can see if we're still gonna get some herb. i got this new dealer i wanna try out, he's a nigger wait umm opps im on yahooka right do people still get touchy over the race subject? fuck it anyway yeah man call when you wake up biznitch i know you'll check your fucking thread yout tard
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The Next Godsend
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hahaha, anyways like I said I was bored and yeah I did leave a few typos and erros on the lyrics, but oh well can't expect every damn thing to be perfect.
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