Crucified Rose

Don't really know what came about this poem, just in one of my wierd moods as of late. So feedback wanted!

Fatal Heaven and Blissful Hell


Calling and writhing it is all but just dying
Falling and tithing as it begins to try flying
Breathing and hiding as it always was trying
Speaking and fighting for it begins lying
Looking and drowning from all the denying
Breaking and frowning as it still comes crying
Laughing and sighing at the complying
Stealing and sighting all of the buying
Fatal Heaven & Blissful Hell
Scarlet Hearts & Faded Tales
Seeking and watching the souls that are hurting
Dancing and talking to angels as if flirting
Wording and moving almost as if blurting
Tearing and ripping at its coating
Soothing and wondering as it becomes floating
Hosting and toasting to all of its boasting
Fatal Heaven & Blissful Hell
Scarlet Hearts & Faded Tales

ThePerfectDrug

i like it

__________________
I've heard you say many times
That you're better 'n no one
And no one is better 'n you.
If you really believe that,
You know you got
Nothing to win and nothing to lose.
From fixtures and forces and friends,
Your sorrow does stem,
That hype you and type you,
Making you feel
That you must be exactly like them.

Crucified Rose

Thanks, it was just a poem that crept up on me out of nowhere lol

ThePerfectDrug

yea ive had a few like that lately, cant even remember what sparked them

__________________
I've heard you say many times
That you're better 'n no one
And no one is better 'n you.
If you really believe that,
You know you got
Nothing to win and nothing to lose.
From fixtures and forces and friends,
Your sorrow does stem,
That hype you and type you,
Making you feel
That you must be exactly like them.