I L P -dedicated to a special guy

Sugar420 · 08-03-2005, 11:10 PM

i be bustin on you a wicked keystyle
i be like melting cheez whiz when i see you smile
my heart drive ready to d/l your love file
dont you kno we go 2gether like gall bladder and bile
you kno i got the stove now let me see your woodpile

boy you make me hot like burning tire
hard to extinguish like kitchen grease fire
why you dont give me that thing for my pacifier
i be smokin so much blunts that only you make me higher
if i say i dont love you then i be a liar

you kno it true like gospel according to mark
you the best damn thing in whole trailer park
boy you got more sweet than noah got ark
is you wearing boat pants? then you best disembark
cuz i dont never lose my case my name aint marsha clark

Sugar420 · 08-04-2005, 10:11 AM

haha thank you kosh. it started as stream of consciousness/free style then i made some revisions to achieve true awfulness

Hooked · 08-04-2005, 08:05 PM

Definitely some vivid imagery in there, and good humor. Great little...dedication.

I wish it was for me
My name starts with 'P,'
Try to penetrate that mind and heart
But I'm too blind to see

Sugar420 · 10-15-2006, 12:51 AM

you kno i aint got no time for none a them hater
busy givin thanx and praise up to the creator
you kno i got me some alli wontcha gimmie some gator
i obey every command if you be my love dictator
i be ready to go so get the check from the waiter

baby why you dont told me you such hot stuff?
boy you so fine i cant get me enough
you and me 2gether like sandpaper and rough
like white and rice like pillow and fluff
you like spraypaint in a bag that i jus love to huff

Hooked · 10-15-2006, 04:04 PM

still going good veda.

can't believe this thread was started over a year ago.

**Pharm Girl** · 10-15-2006, 04:34 PM

When you're good, you're good!

High Roller · 10-16-2006, 07:35 PM

your trying to make it sound overdone, cheesy, and hip-hoppish... right? im just checkin. if not, well, dont tell your guy that.

08-03-2005, 11:10 PM	#1 (permalink)
Sugar420 Old School Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 6,093 Thanks: 32 Thanked 132 Times in 706 Posts	I L P -dedicated to a special guy i be bustin on you a wicked keystyle i be like melting cheez whiz when i see you smile my heart drive ready to d/l your love file dont you kno we go 2gether like gall bladder and bile you kno i got the stove now let me see your woodpile boy you make me hot like burning tire hard to extinguish like kitchen grease fire why you dont give me that thing for my pacifier i be smokin so much blunts that only you make me higher if i say i dont love you then i be a liar you kno it true like gospel according to mark you the best damn thing in whole trailer park boy you got more sweet than noah got ark is you wearing boat pants? then you best disembark cuz i dont never lose my case my name aint marsha clark Last edited by Sugar420; 08-04-2005 at 09:47 AM. Reason: changed cheese to cheez whiz -fits the tone better

08-04-2005, 08:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
Hooked Hedonistic fool Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Denver Metro Posts: 5,479 Thanks: 22 Thanked 35 Times in 28 Posts	Definitely some vivid imagery in there, and good humor. Great little...dedication. I wish it was for me My name starts with 'P,' Try to penetrate that mind and heart But I'm too blind to see __________________ The never-ending quest to find a reason to smile...

10-15-2006, 04:04 PM	#5 (permalink)
Hooked Hedonistic fool Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Denver Metro Posts: 5,479 Thanks: 22 Thanked 35 Times in 28 Posts	still going good veda. can't believe this thread was started over a year ago. __________________ The never-ending quest to find a reason to smile...

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08-04-2005, 10:11 AM	#2 (permalink)
Sugar420 Old School Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 6,093 Thanks: 32 Thanked 132 Times in 706 Posts	haha thank you kosh. it started as stream of consciousness/free style then i made some revisions to achieve true awfulness

10-15-2006, 12:51 AM	#4 (permalink)
Sugar420 Old School Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 6,093 Thanks: 32 Thanked 132 Times in 706 Posts	you kno i aint got no time for none a them hater busy givin thanx and praise up to the creator you kno i got me some alli wontcha gimmie some gator i obey every command if you be my love dictator i be ready to go so get the check from the waiter baby why you dont told me you such hot stuff? boy you so fine i cant get me enough you and me 2gether like sandpaper and rough like white and rice like pillow and fluff you like spraypaint in a bag that i jus love to huff

10-15-2006, 04:34 PM	#6 (permalink)
Pharm Girl Looking for a Bone! Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 4,203 Blog Entries: 13 Thanks: 2,553 Thanked 1,009 Times in 783 Posts	When you're good, you're good!

10-16-2006, 07:35 PM	#7 (permalink)
High Roller holding my balls... Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: b.c Posts: 375 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	your trying to make it sound overdone, cheesy, and hip-hoppish... right? im just checkin. if not, well, dont tell your guy that.

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